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创意诗,蛮实用的。

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原帖由 青春大哥 于 2008-2-27 17:27 发表
我站在窗前 傍晚的黄昏
闻到花香的味道....
云中漫步 抬头向前方望去
公路基边坡上  栽着几棵槐树
槐树枝上开满了黄白黄白的小绒花

我信步走出来 摘了一朵闻了闻
清香清香的
原来我的春天到了.....

云中 ...
汗一个先!感动ING~~~~
谢谢大哥鼓励!!
If you love me, pop and fly; if you hate me, burn and die.

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Spring is come

"Story of Spring",KIKO spring is come,meaning is  happiness in your  lives.
   Sees your me to meet the palpitation; Was thinking your I can in astew; Likes your me actually being at a loss how to proceed,but not for me.

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Thank you for your great poem.
I could hardly speak.

I just want to become a better person before meeting someone new and be sure to know who is my  Mr.right.
If you love me, pop and fly; if you hate me, burn and die.

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飙把  使劲飙。。。。。。。

男人守则第1条:女人永远是对滴 第2条:女人如果做错了,请参照第1条

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飙,么字意思?是吹的意思吗?不懂,请教!

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就是拉风的意思吧 DISKO,你是不是这么说的?
If you love me, pop and fly; if you hate me, burn and die.

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who is your Mr. right? Maybe can be find in this forum, good luck for you!

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,,,,,,YOU and HE,or ME

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who?who ?who?

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我,我,我,我漫步去了
If you love me, pop and fly; if you hate me, burn and die.

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